100 Word Count
Kia orana guys. Me and my class have been making 100 word long stories. I've been trying to get all of my 100 word count stories from week 2 to week 9 completed. It's really really hard. I'm on to my 4th story I just want to show you how much I have done, but it is hard like I said.
Here is my 100 word count story from week two. We had to use the 5 words at the top.
Here is my 100 word count story from week two. We had to use the 5 words at the top.
SALT BROWN MELTED GIRAFFE GREASY
I was going to the zoo with Tiana and Shylah, before we left Tiana made cooked eggs when we ate it, it
was soooo greasy, before we left again i was looking for my metal bracelet i ask tiana and shylah then i
saw it on the oven it was melted and brown, when we finally got to the zoo we went to the cafe there was
salted caramel ice blocks, Tiana and Shylah wanted to see the Giraffe when we got there “where are all
the giraffes?” Tiana said. But there were none there they had all gone.
was soooo greasy, before we left again i was looking for my metal bracelet i ask tiana and shylah then i
saw it on the oven it was melted and brown, when we finally got to the zoo we went to the cafe there was
salted caramel ice blocks, Tiana and Shylah wanted to see the Giraffe when we got there “where are all
the giraffes?” Tiana said. But there were none there they had all gone.
Please give feedback you don't need to if you don't want to, please tell me if you have been there be for.
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Kia ora Sonnie, thank you for sharing your 100 word story, it looks fun but obviously not that easy as you say. A helpful hint - it is much easier for the reader if you use some punctuation, such as fullstops and capital letters. good luck with your next 100 word story Sonnie.
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