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Friday, 6 November 2020

Writing

Descriptive Writing  


Hola readers,

This week we have a descriptive story that you had to write in present tense. We all had really different ideas.  

Writing in present tense is super hard for me. My story was about me being inside of a box and gets lost in the middle of nowhere. 



I woke up inside of the big brown crate in the middle of nowhere, no light and limited oxygen left in the packed cramped crate. I had one item in the crate, a small but useful hammer. I didn’t have another space to swing the hammer so i flipped it around and started to hammer the side of the crate and i made it throw to the other side of the crate 




I hate writing in present tense because I have no ideas for what to write at all.  I still haven't finished my story i have only done one half of my story . 


👻Bye readers👻

1 comment:

  1. Hello Sonnie.
    Some of us find certain things easy while others struggle.I like that you told us you weren't keen to write and find writing difficult.I use the word 'difficult' as I think 'hate' is too strong a word.
    If you could write about anything what would it be and why?.

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